style(welcome): tighten landing copy and reduce em-dash use
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Rework the lede parenthetical and thin the calm/quiet/pool
metaphor where it doubled up on itself, to soften AI-writing tells.
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Julien Calixte
2026-07-11 12:21:15 +02:00
parent 2592b19c8f
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@@ -381,10 +381,10 @@ onMounted(() => {
comes to rest. comes to rest.
</h1> </h1>
<p class="lede"> <p class="lede">
Point it at any markdown a GitHub repo of your own, or public Point it at any markdown: a GitHub repo of your own, or public
notes from the open ATProto network and Remanso turns it into a notes from the open ATProto network. Remanso turns it into a
calm, stackable notebook with backlinks where your thinking stackable notebook with backlinks where your thinking finally
finally runs clear. runs clear.
</p> </p>
<div class="hero-ed-paths"> <div class="hero-ed-paths">
<!-- CTA 01: GitHub repo --> <!-- CTA 01: GitHub repo -->
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ onMounted(() => {
</div> </div>
</div> </div>
<div v-else-if="publicNotesLoadFailed" class="network-empty"> <div v-else-if="publicNotesLoadFailed" class="network-empty">
The pool is quiet right now. Nothing has drifted in yet.
</div> </div>
<router-link <router-link
:to="{ name: 'PublicNoteListView' }" :to="{ name: 'PublicNoteListView' }"