style(welcome): tighten landing copy and reduce em-dash use
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Rework the lede parenthetical and thin the calm/quiet/pool metaphor where it doubled up on itself, to soften AI-writing tells.
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comes to rest.
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comes to rest.
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</h1>
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</h1>
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<p class="lede">
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<p class="lede">
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Point it at any markdown — a GitHub repo of your own, or public
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Point it at any markdown: a GitHub repo of your own, or public
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notes from the open ATProto network — and Remanso turns it into a
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notes from the open ATProto network. Remanso turns it into a
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calm, stackable notebook with backlinks where your thinking
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stackable notebook with backlinks where your thinking finally
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finally runs clear.
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runs clear.
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</p>
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</p>
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<div class="hero-ed-paths">
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<div class="hero-ed-paths">
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<!-- CTA 01: GitHub repo -->
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<!-- CTA 01: GitHub repo -->
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</div>
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</div>
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<div v-else-if="publicNotesLoadFailed" class="network-empty">
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<div v-else-if="publicNotesLoadFailed" class="network-empty">
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The pool is quiet right now.
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Nothing has drifted in yet.
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</div>
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</div>
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<router-link
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<router-link
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:to="{ name: 'PublicNoteListView' }"
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:to="{ name: 'PublicNoteListView' }"
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