From 29c22a9b0f7d86fbabc34d1533270f4457c14726 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Julien Calixte <julien.calixte@theodo.com>
Date: Mon, 20 Apr 2026 18:23:47 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] copy(home): reframe manifesto sentence without negative
 framing

---
 src/components/WelcomeWorld.vue | 3 +--
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/WelcomeWorld.vue b/src/components/WelcomeWorld.vue
index d8c412a..529a948 100644
--- a/src/components/WelcomeWorld.vue
+++ b/src/components/WelcomeWorld.vue
@@ -396,8 +396,7 @@ const showReviewCard = computed(
             <div class="section-label mono">§ 01 — what is remanso</div>
             <p class="drop-cap manifesto-p">
               <em>Remanso</em> is a Portuguese word for the still pool that
-              forms where a river slows. It is not stagnant — water flows
-              through — but for a moment, it is calm enough to see the bottom.
+              forms where a river slows. The current still moves through — but for a moment, it is calm enough to see the bottom.
               This is what notes should feel like. A Remanso takes your
               markdown files and lays them out as a linked notebook you can
               read, follow, and add to. No lock-in. Your notes stay in Git.