docs: trim AI writing tells from READMEs and docs prose
Drop magic adverbs (silently, arguably), a stakes-inflation flourish, and the bold-first Snippets bullets; de-duplicate the "usable artifact, not a checkpoint" line shared by the README and roadmap.
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The reframing question: **what is the user actually waiting for?** For `Ctrl-S`, the moment that matters is "my work is saved" — and the SD card completes the write in 50–200 ms. Save = safe. Same instant.
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For `Ctrl-G`, the equivalent moment isn't "push complete." It's "commit landed locally" — which happens at ~0.2 seconds, well before the push even starts. From that moment on, your work is preserved across power loss, SD removal, the apocalypse — everything except remote delivery. The remaining 5–10 seconds is _transport of an already-safe thing_.
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For `Ctrl-G`, the equivalent moment isn't "push complete." It's "commit landed locally" — which happens at ~0.2 seconds, well before the push even starts. From that moment on, your work is preserved across power loss and SD removal — everything except remote delivery. The remaining 5–10 seconds is _transport of an already-safe thing_.
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Surface that moment in the side panel at ~0.2 seconds (`✓ committed abc1234 · pushing…`) and the perceived latency of `Ctrl-G` collapses from 10 seconds to roughly 200 milliseconds. The gap with `Ctrl-S` disappears.
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